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Section Eight Parallelism（第1页）

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Parallelism（orparallelstructure）istheuseofaseriesofwords，phrases，subordinateclauses，orseobeparallel，eatmustmatchtheothers；inotherwords，allelementsinaseriesshouldbeallnouives，adverbs，orverbsintheform.

1.Parallelwords

1）Writingisaslowprsiderablethought，time，a.

&obed，earlytorise，makesamahy，wealthy，andwise.

3）Ihereareenoughtimesointed，depressedandannoyed.

4）Theuaeographically，spirituallyandprofessionally.

5）Eahasauniquewayofseeioug，tastingandthinking.

6）Thethreemostonpurparetoeoinform，andtopersuade.

2.Parallelphrases

1）Theadventurous（历险者）arefreetofollowthesmallesttracks（小路）upthemountains，acrossthedesertsoris.

2）Thekeystradesaretotakeeffeotesinclass，toplanstudytime，andtopreparecarefullyforexams.

3）Welear，experie，andhopeforsuthefuture.

4）Seeingmuch，sufferingmudstudyingmucharethethreepillars（支柱）.

3.Parallelsubordinateclauses

1）Johhisbookwouldbepublished，thatitwouldbeeabestseller，andthatitwouldbemadeintoamovie.

2）Sheisawomaands，whoenjoyshouseorshipsherhusband.

3）Somecollegegraduatesattendlawschoolbecausetheyhopetogethigh-payingjobs，becausetheyareowork，aheyareelsetodo.

4.Parallelsentences

1）Therearethreewaystomakemoney.Youheritit.Youmarryit.Youstealit.

2）AllofJimmy'sfriendssayheisawuy.Whenafriendneedsmoney，Jimmyisreadytolendit.Whenafriendneedssomehelp，Jimmyistheretogivehimahand.Whenafriendneedsaride，Jimmyofferstotakehim.EveryonelovesJimmyandthi.Buthiswifethioogenerous.

3）Similarly，atomseandgoinamolecule（分子），butthemoleculeremains；moleeandgoihecellremains；eandgoinabody，butthebodyremains；personseandganization，buttheanizationremains.

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Faultyparallelismosesdohesamegrammatietypicalexamplesarelistedbelow:

1）Ourteacherteacheswithskillandhumorously.

2）ProfessorCrayaskedherstudentstoclosetheirbooks，totakeoutapenandapieceofpaper，andthattheyweretowriteashortposition.

3）Ingacareer，youshouldplancarefullyandalsosomereseareeded.

&ehesameproblem:faultyparallelism.Ience1），skillisanoun，buthumorouslyisanadverb.Ihefirsttwoelemeivephrases，yetthethirdo.Ihefirstelemeivevoice，yettheseentisshiftedtothepassivevoiecessarily.

Tobeparallel，elementsiallbeexpressedii.Theabovesentenbecorrectedasfollows:

4）Ourteacherteacheswithskillandhumor.

5）ProfessorCrayaskedherstudentstoclosetheirbooks，totakeoutapenandapieceofpaper，andtowriteashortposition.

6）Ingacareer，youshouldplancarefullyandalsodosomeresearch.

Practice2-8-1

&ifywhieachpairbelowsacorrectparallelstrudusparallelelements.Ansrovided.

1.（a）Hetookthejobbeeededmoneyaedexperience.

（b）Hetookthejobbeeededtoearnsomemoneyandex-periencewouldbeusefultohim.